I really like the flashback technique! People can’t help but want to take a closer look at what kind of story happened between Xiao Nizi and Tang Shao!
I can understand how Xiao Nizi felt when she thought she was alive soon. If there was only such a time left in her life, what would I do?
This kind of question is not that I have not asked myself, and it resonated in just a moment, but why did her family forge the certificate?
Just to let Xiao Nizi go on a vacation? I always feel the smell of conspiracy!
But no matter what, I really hope someone can take good care of Xiao Nizi! And Shao Tang appeared so gorgeously!
Drooling… Wipe it… It seems that all the big and young are arrogant! But all the girls just eat this set. Xiao Nizi, who thought she was about to die, met the domineering Tang Shao, and instantly felt that the screen turned pink!
But why are there always some worries? Maybe it’s a flashback relationship at the beginning, and the current beauty will eventually be forced to turn into a lie…
Well, let him go! Now it’s good to have love! Just look at it and it’s dead, so update it quickly!
[Long review] The shadows flow
A brief comment on the
title of “First Marriage: Flashing Love and Cute Wife”, the title of this article shines. The two words “first marriage” and “Flash” bring readers a preconceived notion. Later, “Cute Wife” III The font shows the cute character of the heroine, which is very well received.
The brief introduction contains only a few figures, but it covers the main line of the whole novel very clearly, using a hypothetical setting tone to bring the heroine between the wedding, the happiness after the honeymoon to hesitation, and then to the last tearful face. Just a few sentences bring the reader into the plot that the author wants to express.
The beginning of the chapter uses a flashback technique to introduce readers to questions about what happened between them. The previous foreshadowing is laid, and the follow-up begins to show the encounter and entanglement of the two of them. This also makes the readers have a strong curiosity. What happened in between? Why has it changed from the previous couple to the current situation? Arouse the desire to continue to click and watch.
In this regard, the foreshadowing is quite satisfactory.
With the development of the plot, the entanglement between the two slowly surfaced, the illness, going abroad to relax? Just because I thought I was dying, I agreed to the protagonist’s proposal, marriage, and honeymoon. The plot of the whole prelude was described properly, but the plot was relatively straightforward, but it was a natural fit.
The development of the relationship between the male and female protagonist is slightly faster, even if it is love at first sight, but for a big boss, in this case, falling in love with the female protagonist, and then getting married, it is a bit fast and unbelievable.
The author’s characterization is very good, not only from the front, but also from the side, it allows the reader to see the characters in the book very intuitively, and the character is on the paper and stays in the reader’s mind. .
The essay “First Marriage: A Flashing Love and Cute Wife”, the main line is prominent, the characters are brilliant, the plot grasps the rhythm is appropriate, and there are some foreshadowings. In general, it is still a good essay, that is, there is too much emotional drama. Fast, relatively speaking, there is no big problem. After all, the prelude is just to lay the groundwork for their feelings, and can be ignored.
Finally, I wish the author can write more and better works~
[Long review] Little Dase
It’s the last chapter after flipping through it. It feels very unsatisfactory, so I just leave a long comment to sort out my mood.
“First Marriage: Flashing Love and Cute Wife”, just reading the title of the book, I think it is a sweet to greasy text. Whether it is first marriage or flashing love, it is the theme that little Dassault likes, so I immediately He held it up and looked at it.
The whole book is smoothly written, and there are some shortcomings in the feeling that the progress is a bit slow, and the rhythm feels a bit procrastinated, but it does not affect the love of Xiao Dase for this article. Okay, I admit that my favorite direction is off. It’s from Tao Tianyou. At that moment, that cynical and bad-looking man became drunk, and then he couldn’t help himself.
In terms of the drama, Tao Tianyou is actually not too much, but I don’t know why, he has no resistance to Tianyou. Seeing the changes in the eyes of Tianyou in Chapter 41, I finally understand why two people who love each other can still be friends after breaking up. It is not because they have not loved each other, but because they still love each other. The truth).
It’s sad to see Tao Tianyou like this, but I also met the future trend of the novel. It’s impossible not to abuse it. Between Tao Tianyou and Tang Yuwei, Da Nizi should choose Tang Yuwei, right? There may be some scenes of falling in love and killing each other, but after all, two people can still be together happily. Otherwise, how can they be worthy of the book title “First Marriage: Flashing Love and Cute Wife”?
But then, what will our God do? Sure enough, the male protagonist is used to love the female protagonist, and the male second is for the public fans. Now I am excited when Tao Tianyou comes out, and I feel distressed when he sees his unrevealed concern or sadness. I hope that I can give God bless a better life. It’s the end!
[Long review] Buerdou
For Ye Tingni, apart from four words, I really can’t find any other words to describe her. I take the blame!
Regardless of whether it is possible to be with Tang Yuwei, or whether he will resent after knowing the truth, she should not run away.
Leaving alone means that there is nothing to do with each other ever since. Now that you are ready not to see each other, why don’t you just clarify your words before leaving?
To make it clear, if Tang Yuwei resents, the two can still be separated. The most wrong thing she did was to leave without saying a word.
On the contrary, I felt a little sympathetic to Tang Yuwei. If she was the one who was deceived at first, what about after she knew the truth? Why should innocent people bear your deception, and be a person who gives warmth when you are most helpless.
In my opinion, Ye Tingni is a person who uses evasion to solve problems. She looks like a very strong person, but she has never been strong, whether it is for Ye Tingfen or Tao Tianyou, she I have never really blamed them, or even forgiven without a trace. She is a paper tiger at best. She is timid and afraid of facing reality. She wants to work hard to carry everything, but she is overwhelmed. In her heart, Family affection, friendship, love may be better than everything, everything can be tolerated.
I don’t actually like the role of Ye Tingni, but I will look forward to this story as always, come on!
